One printed book, two subjects.
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     With the success of the Kickstarter campaigns, I was able to produce this high-quality, beautiful book on writing that you'll be proud to have on your shelf, and will want to reference over and over. 
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      Each Kickstarter special-edition flipbook has two subjects in a single volume. One subject on one side, flip it, and find the second subject on the other side. Unless I do a super-duper special edition sometime down the road, this printing will always be the best print version of this book.
 
     Whether you’re an adept or a neophyte, this special-edition flipbook of Action Sequences & Sex Scenes will help you write better action. Which kind of pow, bang, and boom we’re talking about is up to you!
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    Action Sequences
    Action Sequences is divided into 8 easy-to-access dilemmas that I most frequently see plaguing action scenes.
 
missing emotional penetration
wordiness
setting and blocking
pacing
repetition
melodramatics
momentum
bad research
 
    Each section offers a deep dive with examples into the subject matter, plus a bunch of sidebar Pro Tips and exercises.
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    Sex Scenes
    Sex Scenes delves into the multitude of complex and difficult aspects of writing sex scenes in fiction.
 
    I go into detail on:
 
if and when you should include a sex scene
how far you should go
what a sex scene should do for your story
(most importantly) what it should do for your characters
the most common mistakes I see and how to fix them
words you should probably put on your no-fly list
 
    In the margins you’ll find Pro Tips and exercises to help you through.